Overview
Is the essay question clearly stated?
What is the thesis or main idea?
Is the conclusion clear?
Does the conclusion match the thesis?
Structure
Are the paragraphs too long to short?
What are the main ideas or topic sentences of each paragraph?
Is there a clear logical progression of ideas?
Paragraphs: (Point, Example, Explanation)
Is there evidence to back up each topic sentence?
Are there clear explanations of the evidence?
Are quotes (when needed) used properly?
Sentences
Is the essay written in an appropriate style?
Is the meaning of the sentence clear?
Are the tenses correct (present tense to discuss literature)?
Are sentences too long or too short?
Are the sentences clearly linked with cohesive devices and discourse markers such as: however, nevertheless, in addition, therefore?
Vocabulary
Is there much unnecessary repetition of vocabulary?
Has the writer used the correct vocabulary for the topic?